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Awesome!

This flash was excellent. The music was very nice, and it matched the animation very well. (perfect?) It had so much story in such a short time. Defying the system, falling in love and (losing?) that love. Kinda had a Hulk moment then lol. You really should make more and turn this into a series. Answer a few questions, like is she really dead, etc. Just take what you have here and expand it to cover a few episodes.
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Very nice style

I like the way your speed animations always come out so cool, but very different from 1 another. And after seeing your SSFL trailer, im not sure how much better you can get Spike!

Beautiful drawings and original storyline

You have good character design, good voicing, and great shadowing. Gonna be hard to cram such a cool storyline into 45 minutes. I really can't see anything to improve on, but seeing as how you made hug me to the skies, there wasn;t anything to improve on in that one either. Maybe you'll bring some of those characters into this plot? would be cool. Must follow this series.

The best on the Portal

The only problem is that when you pick up a Z tile, and you have quad blue lasers and blonus lock on, the Z tile still sets your weapon back to the ships original piece of s--t weapon. Even finding a blue laser is stupid hard. Also, on some of the early teen levels, those blue electric ships leave some kind of ark on the screen that stays for the whole level, which is obviously a bug. I know that I have been harping on the glitches, but this game is still stupid good. You could market this, probably for the Wii, like alien hominid

awsome

needs to improve load time
but awsome gameplay

good

ggood movement graphics

Amazing use of uncommon instruments

You do not here hear a few of these instruments commonly anywhere on NG. Unfortunately the Violin introduced at 1:58 killed EVERYTHING. It doesn't fit the mood of the song at all, and it feels like that melody is very forced and too quick. It doesn't flow smoothly like the rest of your song. Ignoring that I would like to see more interesting work like this from you in the future! Amazing work, keep going!

Soothing

I like how you managed to get all of the instruments to compliment each other perfectly, and still keep the song quiet. I could fall aslee pto this, in the good way. I hope you keep up this brand of music, as it's hard to find on NG.

Great balance

You managed to make all of the instruments just loud enough as to not overpower one another. The only thing that could be better is to turn up the vocals a little bit.